chasesparrow

denwatIs, while I'm normally on the admin's side, there really is way too many spelling and grammar errors here to really say it was a proper check; not including the speech patterns you're referring to, they were quite obvious derps...that being said, it wasn't unreadable as some people were trying to make it sound. I personally found it far more enjoyable than I thought I would, the stories I've read so far (Mirai, Misaki, Shizuka) are all pretty good. Not excellent, but among the better VNs I've read. 8/10. The scene (I assume) they're referring to involves Ikuya by the shoe lockers; it involves a possible programming bug, and was during either Misaki or Shizuka's paths. The scene would play once, after which the log would display a scene referral message and loop once before continuing the story. On a less serious note, I know I've heard (possibly something similar if not same) 'Track 15 - Sorry' before...for some reason it really reminds me of Air.

Uhm...sorry to say, but just reading one path...normally I'm on the admin's side, but, no. No, you didn't spell or grammar check. It's not unreadable like some of the people on the site are trying to make it sound, but still, one of many examples I've noticed in a single day 'huritng' I'm pretty sure is spelled wrong. From one person who translates to another, please take into account others' comments before immediately jumping on the defensive.