sanahtlig 10 Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 Poetry doesn't work when the author has poor command of the language. I can sort of glimpse what Ultimecea was trying to accomplish, but without excellent writing it just comes off as nonsense to most readers. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
ChexGuy 13 Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 ellipses errwhar Quote Link to post Share on other sites
switch 13 Posted May 26, 2013 Share Posted May 26, 2013 nice poetry dude...like i need to watch yuri and then come back to actually enjoy it...... they say poems are more comprehensible after you fap , actually there was a japanese word for that....the moment after fapping which a man can think clearly Quote Link to post Share on other sites
XaNaToSzX 10 Posted May 30, 2013 Share Posted May 30, 2013 No matter how much I read this, its so incomprehensible that it became comprehensible, still..................... damn I am having anothed vision Quote Link to post Share on other sites
napoleon 134 Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 hey rasta bro dont be gettin giggly brained on me now, ur wisdom is whack but your words ring my bell Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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