Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 (edited) http://i.imgur.com/KnG5kXN.png http://i.imgur.com/76KZiEC.png http://i.imgur.com/QNuVOWT.png http://i.imgur.com/hrl0a9i.png http://i.imgur.com/0Oc9bVe.png http://i.imgur.com/8WX56uP.png http://i.imgur.com/7tfLGEQ.png http://i.imgur.com/SQcEFY2.png http://i.imgur.com/QyYqQoz.png http://i.imgur.com/6RaOdwr.png http://i.imgur.com/1wiSrbJ.png http://i.imgur.com/r3cNwSG.png http://i.imgur.com/aP8rNID.png http://i.imgur.com/idh8CeH.png http://i.imgur.com/UyO197m.png Demo v4.5 released! (trimmed prologue, some changes) DOWNLOAD BELOW! http://i.imgur.com/Y7Xisxt.png Don't forget to visit our website for real-time updates and extra content! http://i.imgur.com/Nek43iH.png Edited January 18, 2016 by Helvetica Standard Update Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Kaskade 12 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 I'd be able to proof read or QC :3 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
erogeking 15 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 you sir have caught my intrigue. So can you give us a little summary of the vn's story line. How long are you planing on making the vn and also will there be multiple endings. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 (edited) @Kaskade, Many thanks. I'll be sure to provide you with the materials once the script is completed. Stay in touch :3 @erogeking, I'm glad you're interested. Though I'm really tempted to give you guys a summary of the VN, the plot is fairly complicated to explain briefly. it is sci fi for the most part but not exactly conventional, what I can tell you is that involves, dreams, neurological rarities and reality inside another reality. It also has plenty of romance and a Japanese setting. There are multiple endings: 4 true ends (for each of the 3 main heroines + requested loli) 1 very bad end, several bad ends and 1 normal end. I plan on working on this VN till I finish it, which I expect happens soon (3 to 4 months) safest is 5 months, as it won't take me longer than that. Edited October 10, 2013 by Helvetica Standard Quote Link to post Share on other sites
iLoveTsundere 10 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 get a yaoi ending in for ulti. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Gerard the Lone Wolf 10 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 Get an ending where you help demon fapping to Diablo 3 thinking of Nikki Minaj. http://i.imgur.com/NSxwFTm.jpg Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Chocolatemilkgod 16 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 Glad to see it's going well helv! As I said ages back I'd love to help test it if you need that or to come up with some crackpot ideas. Love to see how the development progresses, and can't wait to play the finished game Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Gerard the Lone Wolf 10 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 ^ Where is your Grisaia review? Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Chocolatemilkgod 16 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 ^ Where is your Grisaia review? Haha, I knew you were going to ask that. I'll get to it eventually, although I'll probably put it up on my blog first (I apologize if it's a bit difficult to read, that's something I have to work on)... At any rate, hopefully in the next few weeks? I already did the mind map ages ago so I know most of the main writing points that I'll write the review around. It's just the case of finding time that it's not summer since I have a pretty busy schedule (mind you I really want to do it, time permitting). Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 Get an ending where you help demon fapping to Diablo 3 thinking of Nikki Minaj. I'll see what I can do >x) get a yaoi ending in for ulti. I can do that, It would be a joke ending though *jots down: include yaoi end* XD Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 Glad to see it's going well helv! As I said ages back I'd love to help test it if you need that or to come up with some crackpot ideas. Love to see how the development progresses, and can't wait to play the finished game *puts on glasses* looks like I have an editor! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 Some screenshots. Tell me what you think, guys :3 http://i.imgur.com/6Dm2AgL.png http://i.imgur.com/5mwep4f.png http://i.imgur.com/YMwkvlg.png http://i.imgur.com/pL1XJLi.png http://i.imgur.com/90aauqy.png http://i.imgur.com/rPAQlcG.png http://i.imgur.com/NBEoBZc.png http://i.imgur.com/cGBC8fb.png http://i.imgur.com/H7Rwm6E.png http://i.imgur.com/4p2SxEz.png http://i.imgur.com/ZJgvAWG.png Quote Link to post Share on other sites
OneManArmy 82 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 Violet Hill Edit: Also, you made that twintail heroine cry, curse you!!! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
zokoxex 10 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 wait...where is the loli?!?!?! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Chocolatemilkgod 16 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 (edited) Actually I'd be more than happy to edit a bit as long as I'm not knee-deep in work. I wouldn't call myself a writer or anything, but I'm good enough to check through things and provide a bit of feedback (I write science, not fiction). It'd be pretty cool if someone who help out with the art volunteered or something from the forum or elsewhere to provide a few BGs, CGs or even sprites. I'm looking forward to reading the story . Edited October 8, 2013 by Chocolatemilkgod Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 wait...where is the loli?!?!?! Hmmm...that's right, no lolis.. I can try and add another heroine and let her be a loli but.. well, the VN has already 9 chapters and will be pretty long as it is.. I'll think about that. I like lolis too Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 Actually I'd be more than happy to edit a bit as long as I'm not knee-deep in work. I wouldn't call myself a writer or anything, but I'm good enough to check through things and provide a bit of feedback (I write science, not fiction). It'd be pretty cool if someone who help out with the art volunteered or something from the forum or elsewhere to provide a few BGs, CGs or even sprites. I'm looking forward to reading the story . You can be a beta tester that way you'll have more time to check and enjoy the VN at the same time, while providing me with some info on typos, bugfixes and other errors. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
iLoveTsundere 10 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 no perv older woman heroine? (teacher or neighbor or whatever) Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 (edited) no perv older woman heroine? (teacher or neighbor or whatever) I'm on my own! XD adding loli and older woman as heroines would require a lot more time, and aside from just "writing" the plot I'm also programming and scripting. XD Let's do this: (Since I want to finish by January) You guys vote on the 4th heroine Criteria is fairly open; go mad. Loli, oppai, petanko, bishoujo, tsundere, yandere, kuudere, etc you can also vote on hair color, hairdo, hair length, 3 sizes, height and weight. Cast your votes, guys Edited October 8, 2013 by Helvetica Standard Quote Link to post Share on other sites
desi 53 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 What are the personalities/descriptions of the three current heroines? Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 What are the personalities/descriptions of the three current heroines? Minamoto Rin - Tsundere with volatile personality, has mood swings every so often and engages in physical violence if mocked. Tachibana Kanade - Childhood friend, genki girl, overly clingy and stalkery, optimistic and cheerful. Sasaki Akane - Ojosama, filthy rich, polite, cynic, tries to fit into normal society archetypes, model student. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Chocolatemilkgod 16 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 (edited) Kuudere Edit: I don't really like loli's that much, so... Edited October 8, 2013 by Chocolatemilkgod Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Dubs 13 Posted October 8, 2013 Share Posted October 8, 2013 Gray haired Loli ( for the love of god make her chest size actually seem logical, no quadruple D sized heroine ) That would have my vote, plus a lot seem to like Loli's on this forum :L Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 8, 2013 Author Share Posted October 8, 2013 (edited) Kuudere - 1 Loli - 1 @Dubs, breast size is a matter of perspective, since I'm using 3DCG renders bust tends to look bloaty as a result of 3D effect, only busty heroine is Akane and she's got half the maximum rack size allowed by the program. if I have to put it in cups I'd say Kanade is A cup, Rin is B cup and Akane is C cup.. Edited October 9, 2013 by Helvetica Standard Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted October 9, 2013 Author Share Posted October 9, 2013 Update: Script version is: 0.20 We need more votes for the 4th heroine! XD Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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