Chocolatemilkgod 16 Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 Yeah, tell us what you think! Just, uh, remember I have this voodoo doll and it's really close to this conveniently placed bucket of water. You never know, the wrong comment might just push it over the edge O: But, yeah, seriously, looking forward to your thoughts. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 9, 2014 Author Share Posted January 9, 2014 Update! :3 I have my handful of Gerard voodoo dolls too! 10 for 5 bucks, a real bargain! Ok now, the update XD Choco and I have seen first hand how difficult it is to find a good/free artist. Some charge for their work, others don't have the style we're looking for and a lot more are already taken or crazy busy. It's a nightmare... Since 3DCG sprites are not MOE inspiring or eye catching, we're changing them permanently with regular artwork... in this case MY artwork. (We have no options so..) I've already drawn a single sprite (Rin in her school uniform) and unless the situation changes miraculously, I'll draw the rest.. ugh. xD It might not be the best artwork but it's far better than using 3DCG renders. Have a look: http://i.imgur.com/vX6RA4G.png I'll keep you guys updated Quote Link to post Share on other sites
hyromaru 29 Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 Helv i'm liking that sprite! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Harlequin 17 Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 ^ Agreed, it's cute. Oh and honestly, it looks like Violet Hill might be the next and second great OELVN that I get to read (Katawa Shoujo being the first one). Really. You're obviously very enthusiastic and serious about it, and you seem to know exactly what you want to do with the story in it. It's romance - but also sci-fi, which makes it more interesting to me personally. And I'm liking the photorealistic backgrounds... several awesome VNs use that and it definitely works. As for public domain music... you know, the original (masterpiece) Higurashi sound novel series is also using that (only arcs 1-4). And in Higurashi's case, it's pretty damn good for just being free music. As long as each song fits well, it's totally fine. Just sayin'. *shrug* Guess I just wanted to throw that out there! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 10, 2014 Author Share Posted January 10, 2014 Helv i'm liking that sprite! Many thanks. I think it came out nicely too. It's my first attempt at making a sprite, so I guess I don't suck as much as I thought. I am however, tirelessly hunting for an actual artist, otherwise drawing all the other sprites plus SCG's would take me like 10 years... T-T Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 10, 2014 Author Share Posted January 10, 2014 ^ Agreed, it's cute. Oh and honestly, it looks like Violet Hill might be the next and second great OELVN that I get to read (Katawa Shoujo being the first one). Really. You're obviously very enthusiastic and serious about it, and you seem to know exactly what you want to do with the story in it. It's romance - but also sci-fi, which makes it more interesting to me personally. And I'm liking the photorealistic backgrounds... several awesome VNs use that and it definitely works. As for public domain music... you know, the original (masterpiece) Higurashi sound novel series is also using that (only arcs 1-4). And in Higurashi's case, it's pretty damn good for just being free music. As long as each song fits well, it's totally fine. Just sayin'. *shrug* Guess I just wanted to throw that out there! Oh my god, you're making me blush I'm doing my absolute best with the story, I hope you guys like it. Also, have no fear! Chocolatemilkgod is our badass editor so even if I screw up, he'll kick me back to the right path. :3 Thanks again, Harle Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 12, 2014 Author Share Posted January 12, 2014 (edited) Update! :3 Warning to STAFF: 80% of staff members are MIA or haven't given reports/work back to me or choco. If you do not report back or give signs of life, we'll have to dismiss you. Sorry, but we need people who are actually interested and actively work with us if we want to meet the 1 year deadline. Hoping to hear from you guys. Here's the changelog as of January 12th 2014: -Prologue: First pass QC (Kaskade and Hazel MIA) Azada and Linkman19 MIA also -Chapter 1: First pass QC (Kaskade and Hazel MIA) Azada and Linkman19 MIA also -Chapter 2: Beta, 1st editing pass completed. -Chapter 3: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 4: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 5: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 6: Beta, Ready for editing. -Chapter 7: Alpha, currently checking. -Chapter 8: 0% -Rin's route: 100% -Kanade's route: 5% -Akane's route: 0% -Yuki's route: 10% -Satsuki's route: 0% -Yaoi arc: Alpha, in scripting and checking. DEMO 2.0 Download here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/2n35789ewhvzwwn/Violet%20Hill%20DEMO-2.0-win.rar "Project Violet" Staff Team Members: (as of January 12th 2014) Writing, programming, scripting, design and sprite artwork: Helvetica Standard. Editor in chief: Chocolatemilkgod. QC and chibi art: Hazel-bun (MIA) QC: Kaskade (MIA) QC: Dubs Beta Testing: linkman19, yachi, Azada, Kaguya. (All MIA, except for yachi.) Lyrics for yaoi end: OMA Edited January 13, 2014 by Helvetica Standard Quote Link to post Share on other sites
OneManArmy 82 Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 Lyrics for yaoi end: OMA So you didn't forget about it? Shit. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Chocolatemilkgod 16 Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 So you didn't forget about it? Shit. Nope. Can't wait to hear your work Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Linkman19 10 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 Update! :3 Warning to STAFF: 80% of staff members are MIA or haven't given reports/work back to me or choco. If you do not report back or give signs of life, we'll have to dismiss you. Sorry, but we need people who are actually interested and actively work with us if we want to meet the 1 year deadline. Hoping to hear from you guys. Here's the changelog as of January 12th 2014: -Prologue: First pass QC (Kaskade and Hazel MIA) Azada and Linkman19 MIA also -Chapter 1: First pass QC (Kaskade and Hazel MIA) Azada and Linkman19 MIA also -Chapter 2: Beta, 1st editing pass completed. -Chapter 3: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 4: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 5: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 6: Beta, Ready for editing. -Chapter 7: Alpha, currently checking. -Chapter 8: 0% -Rin's route: 100% -Kanade's route: 5% -Akane's route: 0% -Yuki's route: 10% -Satsuki's route: 0% -Yaoi arc: Alpha, in scripting and checking. DEMO 2.0 Download here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/2n35789ewh...MO-2.0-win.rar "Project Violet" Staff Team Members: (as of January 12th 2014) Writing, programming, scripting, design and sprite artwork: Helvetica Standard. Editor in chief: Chocolatemilkgod. QC and chibi art: Hazel-bun (MIA) QC: Kaskade (MIA) QC: Dubs Beta Testing: linkman19, yachi, Azada, Kaguya. (All MIA, except for yachi.) Lyrics for yaoi end: OMA Hey sorry for being MIA, been busy cause i have exams, i should be able to make a report tuesday as i'll be finished then or by thrusday at latest, once again so sorry Quote Link to post Share on other sites
desi 53 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 Update! :3 I have my handful of Gerard voodoo dolls too! 10 for 5 bucks, a real bargain! Ok now, the update XD Choco and I have seen first hand how difficult it is to find a good/free artist. Some charge for their work, others don't have the style we're looking for and a lot more are already taken or crazy busy. It's a nightmare... Since 3DCG sprites are not MOE inspiring or eye catching, we're changing them permanently with regular artwork... in this case MY artwork. (We have no options so..) I've already drawn a single sprite (Rin in her school uniform) and unless the situation changes miraculously, I'll draw the rest.. ugh. xD It might not be the best artwork but it's far better than using 3DCG renders. Have a look: http://i.imgur.com/vX6RA4G.png I'll keep you guys updated Haven't checked out this thread in a while, but this looks pretty good. Keep it up. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Linkman19 10 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 Update! :3 Warning to STAFF: 80% of staff members are MIA or haven't given reports/work back to me or choco. If you do not report back or give signs of life, we'll have to dismiss you. Sorry, but we need people who are actually interested and actively work with us if we want to meet the 1 year deadline. Hoping to hear from you guys. Here's the changelog as of January 12th 2014: -Prologue: First pass QC (Kaskade and Hazel MIA) Azada and Linkman19 MIA also -Chapter 1: First pass QC (Kaskade and Hazel MIA) Azada and Linkman19 MIA also -Chapter 2: Beta, 1st editing pass completed. -Chapter 3: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 4: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 5: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 6: Beta, Ready for editing. -Chapter 7: Alpha, currently checking. -Chapter 8: 0% -Rin's route: 100% -Kanade's route: 5% -Akane's route: 0% -Yuki's route: 10% -Satsuki's route: 0% -Yaoi arc: Alpha, in scripting and checking. DEMO 2.0 Download here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/2n35789ewh...MO-2.0-win.rar "Project Violet" Staff Team Members: (as of January 12th 2014) Writing, programming, scripting, design and sprite artwork: Helvetica Standard. Editor in chief: Chocolatemilkgod. QC and chibi art: Hazel-bun (MIA) QC: Kaskade (MIA) QC: Dubs Beta Testing: linkman19, yachi, Azada, Kaguya. (All MIA, except for yachi.) Lyrics for yaoi end: OMA Done it, I sent you my report, now get off my back! JK seriously, hope it helps Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 13, 2014 Author Share Posted January 13, 2014 (edited) Update! :3 Prologue and Chapter 1 updated (DEMO will not be updated FOR NOW.) -cleaned up script and trimmed down some lines. Intro is less verbose and more punctual. -Added more lines and detailed hints on background story to build up on characterisation. -Changed some story bits for better character development. -Tuned down pace for better story progression. -Revamped Akane's dialogue completely for added characterisation. -Changed rain on the roof SFX for a better one (Thanks Exsilon for the shout out.) -Changed dripping sound at start for a more relaxing less distracting one. -Changed Title screen music, last one was a bit to plain (Thanks AhriFoxFire for the shout out.) -Removed ear ringing sound as it was grating for some readers. -Added jargon tags for all worldbuilding terms Sprite Completion (Yes, this whole thing is a huge endeavour in itself so I'll post here how much I've drawn/completed.) :3 Rin sprites: 30% (5 uniform)(1 casual clothes) Kanade sprites: 0% Akane sprites: 10% (1 uniform) Yuki sprites: 1% (sketch ready) Satsuki sprites: 0% Sprite CG's: 0% Misc sprites: 0% Overall: 5% Warning to STAFF: 80% of staff members are MIA or haven't given reports/work back to me or choco. If you do not report back or give signs of life, we'll have to dismiss you. Sorry, but we need people who are actually interested and actively work with us if we want to meet the 1 year deadline. Hoping to hear from you guys. Here's the changelog as of January 13th 2014: -Prologue: Testing complete, needs QC (RC2) -Chapter 1: Testing complete, needs QC (RC2) -Chapter 2: Beta, 2nd editing pass. -Chapter 3: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 4: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 5: Beta, ready for editing. -Chapter 6: Beta, Ready for editing. -Chapter 7: Alpha, currently checking. -Chapter 8: 0% -Rin's route: 100% -Kanade's route: 5% -Akane's route: 0% -Yuki's route: 10% -Satsuki's route: 0% -Yaoi arc: Alpha, in scripting and checking. DEMO 2.0 Download here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/2n35789ewhvzwwn/Violet%20Hill%20DEMO-2.0-win.rar "Project Violet" Staff Team Members: (as of January 13th 2014) Writing, programming, scripting, design and sprite artwork: Helvetica Standard. Editor in chief: Chocolatemilkgod. QC and chibi art: Hazel-bun (MIA) QC: Kaskade (MIA) QC: Dubs Beta Testing: Linkman19 Beta Testing: Yachi Beta Testing: Azada (MIA) Beta Testing: Kaguya (MIA) Lyrics for yaoi end: OMA Edited January 13, 2014 by Helvetica Standard Quote Link to post Share on other sites
killerinsidee 14 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 ^ I got some really nice speed from that link, you should use it more often :> Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 13, 2014 Author Share Posted January 13, 2014 ^ I got some really nice speed from that link, you should use it more often :> That's just EG being weird. It looks up the url instead of hotlinking to the archive. I'll post a medium so it redirects instead of doing that dumb shit. And do something to quench your boredom! you're getting more trollish by the day XD Quote Link to post Share on other sites
killerinsidee 14 Posted January 13, 2014 Share Posted January 13, 2014 ^ I'm just trying to help ; 1337 post : D Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Linkman19 10 Posted January 14, 2014 Share Posted January 14, 2014 Woo no longer at risk of being kicked, btw will you be mailing the testers the stuff or will it be on here and the blog? Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 20, 2014 Author Share Posted January 20, 2014 (edited) Quick update! :3 Akane sprite is ready! It took several tries to get her too look like the calm/elegant ojou-sama. Changed eye color, I think amber suits her best :3 Have a look: http://i.imgur.com/Bqr0kOf.png As for the other sprites, Kanade is in "beta" for lack of a better word (she was the easiest to draw XD) but on the other hand, Yuki is on the 6th try and counting (I just suck at drawing lolis, she's very very hard to draw!! ._. ) I'll keep you updated Edited January 20, 2014 by Helvetica Standard Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Maoh 13 Posted January 20, 2014 Share Posted January 20, 2014 Looking really good Btw if you're having problems with lolis, remember their proportions are completely different from normal characters, their head and hips are huge and you gotta exagerate their woman-characteristial parts (mostly waist and hips) And again you most likely know all that since you have achieved that drawing level already Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Helvetica Standard 17 Posted January 20, 2014 Author Share Posted January 20, 2014 Looking really good Btw if you're having problems with lolis, remember their proportions are completely different from normal characters, their head and hips are huge and you gotta exagerate their woman-characteristial parts (mostly waist and hips) And again you most likely know all that since you have achieved that drawing level already Many thanks, I'm really glad you like it! I know about the proportions and I've seen several tutorials already (those helped me A LOT!) but that doesn't make lolis any easier to draw! XDDD Are you an artist, Maoh? If so, would you like to join the project? we need a chibi artist! and you could give me some tips on drawing Yuki! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Maoh 13 Posted January 20, 2014 Share Posted January 20, 2014 Maybe maybe... i don't know if my drawing skillz are up to par with yours please send me some images of some character (3DCG will do) i'll make a chibi out of that and you decide if it would go well with the overall art in game I don't have much time per day to draw, but i'll manage Quote Link to post Share on other sites
lucifer193 12 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Played the demo and was satisfied with the progression of the story... But why did I get "Nisekoi" vibe in this VN? Also...One of the soundtrack in the game reminds me so much of To The Moon... Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Guest loppez Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 (edited) Played the demo and was satisfied with the progression of the story... But why did I get "Nisekoi" vibe in this VN? Also...One of the soundtrack in the game reminds me so much of To The Moon... it is being made by an amateur guy. he can't write his own story. he can only take something from there, something from somewhere else and put that into "his" story. this is not something new. it is just one of X games/stories you can find anywhere. so much time just to release some kind of a duplicate. how exciting. i can tell you right now helvetica, your time spent on this project is not ganna paid off. you just wasted months of time. it might be cruel to you but the truth is cruel. Edited January 21, 2014 by loppez Quote Link to post Share on other sites
hyromaru 29 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 (edited) it is being made by an amateur guy. he can't write his own story. he can only take something from there, something from somewhere else and put that into "his" story. this is not something new. it is just one of X games/stories you can find anywhere. so much time just to release some kind of a duplicate. how exciting. i can tell you right now helvetica, your time spent on this project is not ganna paid off. you just wasted months of time. it might be cruel to you but the truth is cruel. http://puu.sh/6hOR2 Did you even play the demo? Edited January 21, 2014 by hyromaru Quote Link to post Share on other sites
VNHunter 12 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 (edited) it is being made by an amateur guy. he can't write his own story. he can only take something from there, something from somewhere else and put that into "his" story. this is not something new. it is just one of X games/stories you can find anywhere. so much time just to release some kind of a duplicate. how exciting. i can tell you right now helvetica, your time spent on this project is not ganna paid off. you just wasted months of time. it might be cruel to you but the truth is cruel. haaah... I really love idiots... idiots who try to make something and try to improve... but you... haaaah... how about trying to make one yourself... just shut your trap if what you'll only do is complain... if you think you're that good... then prove it... Make one... if you can't, then you're all just talk... complain if you can do better... shut up if all you can only do is complain... -_- Edited January 21, 2014 by VNHunter Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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