Okay Finish the demo and here is some feedback
The writing/story is interesting so far, the introduction and the bit of characters backstory is inviting for me
The Mindstrom concept is good, I like how you mix in the real psychology theories stuffs in too, since I once studies those in my university time mentioning them and involve them in the story made the suspension of disbelief stronger.
there are some anime related cliche here and there which I dont mind since it suppose to be VN style.
And compare to the demo 1.0 having those popup CG (phone, blackboard etc.) really improve t